CRASH ISLAND

--> a note on these: they are all in Microsoft Word (.doc) format. the page layout is landscape with two columns seperated by a line so i could see what it would look like as a finished, published book. it, of course, looks damn good! i don't know your settings on your computer screen, but with mine, when i zoom out to 75% the whole page (two "pages") fit perfectly on my screen and it looks just like a book (font size and all).
--> all i'm really looking for is some feedback as to any plot holes or unanswered questions i may not have thought of. maybe stuff like depth of character or anything you may notice. i really appreciate your help here. thank you!
Enjoy!

I finally got the whole thing put together and revised: here is the version I plan to send in to the agent, when and if I ever get one.

Crash Island - Submission Version